Friendships are a luxury we all come in contact with while we venture our current life. You may even develop such a strong friendship that you'd feel extremely sad about if it was destroyed. Through all the everyday events you've been through with this special person, do you think you would be able to take their life to protect something else that you may love more?
That was the decision Brutus had to make when dealing with Caesar and his new rise to power. This sword I am holding resembles the death of a good friend. Brutus and the conspirators took Caesar's life for Rome. Brutus felt as if Caesar's ambition was getting to the point where his new power was blocking his vision to see the mistakes he was making. Brutus made the most critical decision of his life, and went through with it, delivering the final blow to Caesar's body, which tarnished Caesar's love for Brutus.
Below is a picture of one of my good friends, Spike. This picture resembles friendship, which is something we both definitely shared. Sadly, Spike passed away the beginning of my freshmen year. It was heart breaking, especially since I haven't experienced a loss before that day. I couldn't imagine taking Spike's like away for anything. The reason for this explanation is because it shows how hard of a decision it was for Brutus to kill Caesar. In the end, we all go through hardships and have to make choices we think is best. Some things just end up happening. They may give us lessons to learn, or maybe nothing at all. In the end, all the decisions you make are yours personally, so weigh the consequences carefully.

Wow! Great connections- personally & to JC.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this one, and I'm sorry to hear about Spike. He is very cute, indeed.
ReplyDelete"In the end, we all go through hardships and have to make choices we think is best."
I really like that quote, but you're using incorrect grammar. It should not be "is," but "are," because you are talking about a plural noun. (Choices)
Other than that, I really loved your connection.
I like how it has a personal experience, example of how it relates to the play and words of advice all in one.
ReplyDeleteNice job.!
Aw! That's cute how the friendship between you and your dog Spike has so much to relate to Julius Caesar. I like how you based your personal experience to relate to Brutus when making choices. Good job Ben!
ReplyDeleteYou made a really great connection to Julius Caesar. It must have been terribly painful for Brutus to face the death of a friend, especially since he was the one inflicting it. Great analysis
ReplyDeleteI could also relate to this its hard losing friends and families, but its something we all have to go through. Nice personal connection.
ReplyDeleteGood personal connection to the story. losing a friend can be hard and it must of been really hard for Brutus to kill Caesar.
ReplyDeleteI love how you added some heart-felt, personal details to deepen your connection to the play. I agree with your point that it must've been extremely difficult for Brutus to kill a friend; let alone to take sides. Great strategy by capturing us with your beautiful dog as well. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry about Spike! I can really connect to this because I have also lost a friend once. I like how you used a sword to symbolize Caesar's death. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow Ben, this was amazing. I really liked how you connected this to your own life. This was very heart-felt as well. Amazing job!
ReplyDeletewhoa, really nice connections. Sorry about Spike
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great connection to the story, and It makes it easier to understand since you've used an example from a real life story. Very well written. Great job :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm sorry about Spike.
wowwww nicccee! hahaha , i like how you connected the play to you and your dog , very creative and well thought out post!
ReplyDeleteNice connection! I like how you connected with the play with a emotional connection.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you connected friendships to your dog! Great way of connecting to the play!
ReplyDeletenice using two photos. i liked how you used a sword because JC had fighting and i like how you included your dog because JC was about loyalty
ReplyDeleteGreat use of symbolism with the sword. I especially liked how you took the time to really explain your train of thought in your paragraphs.
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